Welcome to 2013, everybody! New year, new baktun, and a new edition of the Arkadenverse’s core campaign rulebook. Go and download it now!
Don’t feel shy to give feedback or note typos I may have made that need correcting. Errata pages can’t happen without your support!
…Okay, I guess they technically could, but I appreciate y’all.
fionna finch
January 15, 2013 at 12:56 pm
Hi Rappy. I was impressed by the amount of material that went into your book, and I found only a few typos. I listed what I could find here, should no one else have notified you of these by now. The American English threw me off a few times (to me, sizable should be sizeable, traveler should be traveller etc.) but you did amazing considering the amount of text. Grammar seems to be spiffy too, even with the arcane word usage. One thing I would like to bring up, is the font for the titles and names. The blackletter type sometimes becomes unreadable to me. I think that something that doesn’t try to mimic calligraphy would be nicer.
272; Tornado > torndo > tornado
267; Deer > hooved > hoofed
265; Mastodon > surprisinly > surprisingly
265; Drop Bear > disippated > dissipated
264; Monitor Lizard > havea > have
264; cryptid > cryptic?
261; tunneling > tunnelling
162, 256; hault > halt
22, 158, 212, 222, 245; jewelery > jewelry or > jewellery
239; aas > as
222; Creating a Lich > radious > radius
211; Fiendish Smite > emparts > imparts
198, 199; (plant) passivism > pacifism ?
199, 179, 142, 129, 101, 44 > miniscule > minuscule ?
194; Baobbhan Sith Skills; In-timidate > Intimidate
189; Nymph; trystes > trysts
180; Kelpie; Hold Rider; run ino > run into
178; hording > hoarding
137, 173; existance > existence
165; Onyx Imp; stanfard imp > Stanford imp, or, standard imp (maybe it has a degree)
164; Fiends; esidents > residents
159; Djinni, Spell-Like Abilities; dimenson door > dimension door
156; Haggish Changeling; anwer > answer
144; Breaching Fling; modofier > modifier
143; Yeti; uniniated > uninitiated
141; Night Terror; closests > closets
140; unustainable > unsustainable
140; desparate > desperate
139; Czechloslovakia > Czechoslovakia
139; heirarchy > hierarchy
138; supprters > supporters
138, 137, 136; transluscent > translucent
137; Animated Object; semlance > semblance
128; Fiend, Skinhusker; cloven-hooved > cloven-hoofed
89; Ward Land, Failure; subject to sa (what is sa? probably a standard term but I couldn’t figure it out)
89; Burning Hands; danage > damage
87; Blood Bargain; Enchanment > Enchantment
83; Object to Ink; subjector > subject or
77; Web Minor > tomake > to make
68; Basics of Lesser Incatations; a ritualists > as ritualists
19, 39; themself (I’d use themselves, but technically not wrong)
23; chool > school
14; discernable > discernible
12; conspirators (not a real word, consider conspiratorial)
Unfortunately I can’t comment on the actual content, but from what I know it seems to be in order. Nicely done!
++ for including Koschei the Deathless, even if as a sample lich.
fionna finch
January 15, 2013 at 12:58 pm
.. I guess conspirators is a real word! sorry for including that one